Help Him by CelestialDex (2024)

Sweet Pea 23.x - Welcome to All Poetry

Thank you for taking the time to share your poetry here with us, you have written a deeply poignant and emotive piece, the words create strong imagery and deeply draw your reader in to the pain and suffering expressed in a sensitive and emotive way.

All the best in the contest.

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on Nov 21 2020 01:20 PM PST x edit

WishintreeUK - Welcome to AllPoetry

Our peers are always ready to have a mindset as to how they believe will make us feel better... we need to really "listen" in order to be able to help someone who needs it, that shows genuine concern. Life is a learning curve for us all, so I feel many will be able to relate to the words you have penned here.
Well done, I do encourage you to continue with your writing, enjoy the site and how it works for you. Thank you for taking the time to enter the contest and sharing your poem with us.

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on Nov 18 2020 10:51 PM PST x edit

Hitesh C Bhakat - Welcome to AllPoetry.

It is a nice composition with an apt title. The poem portrays a picture connoting a sense of disharmony and discord. Having observed the protagonist fallen victim to all unwanted curse addiction in the progression of life, the narrator while observing the present condition of the protagonist, seems to have found him in a degrading condition of life. Nicely penned creating fresh images in burning simplicity and deft brevity in expressions, the precise statement of metaphors adds beauty to the poem.

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on Nov 15 2020 05:42 AM PST x edit

Heavens Clouds - Welcome to AP

This was very deep, On how this person felt so hopeless in life. You did a great Job writing out the message in your own words, And your just a awesome poet Thank you so much for sharing, And we are glad you are here. I wish you the very best in the contest!

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on Nov 14 2020 09:39 AM PST x edit

Sealife - Welcome to All Poetry!
This is not to long, it is just the right length for how you approached this subject. You made a very good point here and I hope a lot of people get it.
Thank you for sharing that here!
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on Nov 12 2020 10:43 PM PST x edit

Raven Salvatore - Welcome to All Poetry

This poem isn't too long at all, it expresses the impact that drug abuse has on someone's life, within a decent length.
I have never had an addiction like this, but I can see how someone would feel the need to take whatever bloats out the problems of their world. Trouble is, masking never gets rid of the problem but makes you lose so much more.

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on Nov 12 2020 03:14 PM PST x edit

Sats Raiven - Welcome to AllPoetry

only they can choose what it is they want and maybe they would actually realise what harm that stuff is doing and ask for help..I don't think people advising you or, trying to step in helps as it has to come from inside their mind and determination to not having that control them because it is and, it does but..that's how the poem made me think even if that's not the intent

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on Nov 11 2020 11:38 PM PST x edit

Omniveritas - So he got fixed for a fix, got chained up with the cocaine. You're right. Why doesn't anybody just "HELP HIM?" Shake him out of his drug dazed, cocaine fazed stupor that he's in? This poem isn't too long, but it is all too common, a disaster hidden in plain sight. Gives me a fright. Reminds me of Jim Carroll's "Basketball Diaries," w/Leonardo DiCaprio in the main role. There is one problem though. Drug addiction is not a double feature in a matinee show.

This is some deeply resonating subject matter. I was never encouraged to try, but I also don't possess a self-destructive personality. Let's hope you don't, but let's not just avoid folks like this either. As the title of your poem says, "HELP HIM." Hard to do, but we all need to do it when we can, because somebody always needs some help somewhere.

Good poem.

on Nov 11 2020 09:33 PM PST x edit

Canis-lupis - Welcome to All poetry

This was a well written piece which had good ideas and was, wel thought out I liked the ideas which you wrote about and I thought there was plenty here for the reader to enjoy and the piece flowed well and had strong integrity too I thought the ideas and themes which you explored in this were good and the descriptions and imagery were clever too I really enjoyed the read thanks for sharing and keep posting

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on Nov 11 2020 09:04 PM PST x edit

Amethyst Blue - Welcome to All Poetry,
A very nicely written poem on how one's addiction can push away the people,who care for us. And the pain it causes for all involved.Thank you for your entry in this months new member contest. I hope you are enjoying your time here on AP.If you need help or have any questions,feel free to reach out anytime.
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on Nov 11 2020 07:43 PM PST x edit